hmm!
Good job! Witha little more practice I bet you'll be rippin it up! A couple things to try next time...
1. Frame easing
2. More than 2 drawings of the main character. (It makes a huge difference!)
3. Speed up the pace a little. Lots of graphics fast and furious makes for excitement!
4. Practice your direction. Finding the right music really helps with this, I usually listen to music for a good couple hours before I find the right stuff.
5. Loops your music correctly so it flows smoother (Talking about the ending music). Sonic Foundry Sound Foge is great for looping!
Hope I don't sound too preachy!
-Ben Spurgin